Hi Erin, I could tell you put a lot of thought and effort into your memory writing. You included the senses into your descriptions which helps me get a picture in my mind. For example I could picture your garden. I'm hoping to do some gardening soon - do you have any tips for me?
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Hi Erin,
ReplyDeleteI could tell you put a lot of thought and effort into your memory writing. You included the senses into your descriptions which helps me get a picture in my mind. For example I could picture your garden. I'm hoping to do some gardening soon - do you have any tips for me?